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今天,给大家带来一个General IELTS移民类雅思写作范文。
老规矩,以下是正文目录:1,题目2,Mac范文3,范文朗读4, 范文解析上题:You and your family are moving to another country, and you are looking for rented accommodation there.Write a letter to a property agent. In your letterintroduce yourself and your familydescribe the type of accommodation that you hope to findgive your preference for the location of the accommodation审题:Type: formal 正式Key words: introduce/describe accommodation/request and preference- Model Answer 高分范文 & 范文朗读 -▲范文音频戳这里▲To Whom It May Concern:This letter is in reference to an information email I received from your company last week.I plan to move with my family to your city in two months’ time, and so I would like to inquire more specifically about what types of housing your company offers and to get a better idea of the amenities in the areas of available and suitable accommodation.Our first concern is the proximity and vicinity of available schools for our son, and the second is affordability. We hope to find a 3-bedroom fully-furnished condo with study and balcony, in a quiet area, and as alluded to above, near a good school. Ideally, a condominium-style community would be best. For price range, we would be looking for a year-long commitment at between £1,500-2,000/month.We are good tenants as attested to by the 2 references from former landlords I have attached. Thank you in advance for taking the time to assist us in finding suitable housing to rent.Sincerely yours,Roberto Quigmen- Essay Analysis 范文解析 -Standard Phrases:To Whom It May Concern:This letter is in reference toI would like to inquire (about)to get a better idea of (about)Our first concern iswould be bestwould be looking forThank you in advance for taking the time toSincerely yoursVocabulary 高分地道词汇和短语:more specifically about 更具体types of housing 房屋类型amenities 生活设施proximity (时间或空间)接近,邻近,靠近vicinity 周围地区affordability 可负担性a 3-bedroom …fully-furnished 带家具condo (condominium) 公寓a condominium-style community 公寓社区price range 价格区间a year-long commitment 一年合同/租期tenants 房客attested to 作证references 推荐信landlords 房东Cohesion (C&C words and phrases):Thislast weekplan toin two months’ time, and sowhatand to getfirstis, and the second ishope to, and as alluded to above,Ideally,Forlooking for以上就是我今天分享的关于雅思的部分干货,如果你在考雅思,或单纯想提升英语,做1个动作:点击关注我,及时收看更多干货好文。
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